Sunday, 18 May 2014

The Realization......



There was no trace of shame on his face.

She’d expected him to be weighed down with remorse.

“He will die of guilt when he knows this,” she’d thought.

But his indifference surprised her.

Even though the crowd disturbed him, he maintained his composure perfectly.

She knew it now ; he hadn’t been affected the way she’d expected him to be.

She regretted the thoughtlessness  behind her actions.

She saw him cover the body with a white cloth.

She wished she knew then , what she knew now.




















That , her committing suicide would never change her dad , who’d so brutally raped her.

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67 comments:

  1. Aathira18 May 2014 at 12:37

    Loved it .... So touching :(

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  2. Vinodini18 May 2014 at 13:43

    That's tragic.This is a message to all those young women who do not think twice before taking their lives.Life still goes on...with or without them.

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    1. Sreeja Praveen18 May 2014 at 22:01

      True, Vinodini ! Glad you could see it :) Welcome to my blog!

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  3. Midnight scribbles18 May 2014 at 14:28

    oh good lord! :(

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  4. Unknown18 May 2014 at 15:01

    Ah, what a brute is her father! Very tragic.

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    1. Sreeja Praveen18 May 2014 at 22:01

      True :( Real brute, he is. Thanks a lot, Usha Ma'm :)

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  5. the little princess18 May 2014 at 16:14

    oh god..that was chillingly tragic... didn't see this end coming... beautifully written...

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  6. Cifar18 May 2014 at 16:30

    Breach of trust and maligning a pious relationship is the most heinous crime , but one should survive to expose them

    Survivor

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    1. Cifar18 May 2014 at 16:31

      I have also followed your blog

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    2. Sreeja Praveen18 May 2014 at 22:02

      Wow :) Thanks a lot :)

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    3. Sreeja Praveen18 May 2014 at 22:03

      That's true, Cifar. It is easy to run away, but tough to stay !

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  7. Shilpa Garg18 May 2014 at 18:33

    OMG! That's shocking and so tragic too!! Once a crook, always a crook, is apt for him! :(

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  8. Beloo Mehra18 May 2014 at 20:39

    That's so tragic. What a sad, sad tale, Sreeja.

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    1. Sreeja Praveen18 May 2014 at 22:04

      And a sad, sad reality, in the society these days, Beloo !

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  9. kalpana solsi18 May 2014 at 21:55

    Shameful and shocking. Her death did not have any effect on the father.Her death is tragic.

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  10. Ashwin Kumar18 May 2014 at 22:24

    Very well written, Sreeja! Indeed brutal n tragic!!

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    1. Sreeja Praveen1 June 2014 at 17:16

      Yes, Ashwin. Nothing more tragic in such a pure relation :(

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  11. Red Handed19 May 2014 at 09:20

    I AM A BIT DEPRESSED RIGHT NOW.

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    1. Sreeja Praveen1 June 2014 at 17:16

      I take it as your agreement with what I said, Red :(

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  12. Soumya19 May 2014 at 12:52

    Oh this hurts!! I hope someday he gets his due!

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  13. Unknown19 May 2014 at 13:14

    damn.... that made my heart weak... :( sad very sad

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  14. Unknown19 May 2014 at 20:40

    How sad and tragic! So sad when loss if life is treated indifferently.

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  15. Jayanta19 May 2014 at 22:53

    Disturbing situation for the purest of pure relationship...

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    1. Sreeja Praveen1 June 2014 at 17:20

      Yes, purest of pure, and such venom in that !

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  16. Jyotsna Bhatia19 May 2014 at 23:23

    Oh God, that was tragic. How could a father do this to a daughter!!

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    1. Sreeja Praveen1 June 2014 at 17:21

      There are fathers of this kind these days, dear. Tragic :(

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  17. Archana K B20 May 2014 at 05:01

    tragic indeed.. loved the concept of thought process by dead.. something new..

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    1. Sreeja Praveen1 June 2014 at 17:21

      Yes, that was the intended point of view. Thanks for reading , Archana :)

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  18. Vinay Leo R.20 May 2014 at 08:26

    Reminds me of the Silence story I wrote in April. So many such cases. It’s a sad but cold and cruel fact. Sigh.

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    1. Sreeja Praveen1 June 2014 at 17:22

      Yes, similar veins, this one. Cold, and cruel, indeed !

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  19. Rohan Kachalia20 May 2014 at 11:31

    That is very very tragic. How can a father even think of committing such heinous crime. Shame.

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  20. Bikram20 May 2014 at 13:16

    Oh GOD.. there are some sick people out there..

    I wish i could write what all i see in my job..

    Bikram

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  21. Unknown21 May 2014 at 08:26

    That was so brilliantly written Sreeja!!! Amazing!

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  22. Obsessivemom21 May 2014 at 08:30

    Oh I wish she hadn't done that. What a sad waste of a life. Nicely written Sreeja.

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    1. Sreeja Praveen1 June 2014 at 17:24

      Yes, Tulika. I too wish she had better sense :(

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  23. Vidya Sury21 May 2014 at 17:59

    I did a double take at the last line! I love your talent for the shock factor, Sreeja!

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    1. Sreeja Praveen1 June 2014 at 17:24

      Hmm :( Isn't it tragic :(
      Thanks Vidya :) I love the shock :D

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  24. Mina Menon23 May 2014 at 10:07

    Really father of all the people :(

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  25. Anonymous23 May 2014 at 19:22

    Tragic. Brilliantly written:)
    http://vishalbheeroo.wordpress.com/2014/05/22/100-words-on-saturday-100-words-on-saturday-2014-14/

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  26. Sitara24 May 2014 at 13:00

    oh a serious blot on such a sanctified relationship

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  27. Anita Sabat25 May 2014 at 10:13

    Sad & shocking story, Sreeja. Reality for some.. Nicely expressed.

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    1. Sreeja Praveen3 June 2014 at 11:48

      Yes, true, Anita . Reality for some ! Thanks a lot !

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  28. Swathi Shenoy25 May 2014 at 10:57

    oh dat was shocking!!!

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  29. Anonymous27 May 2014 at 15:08

    I missed the last line (below the picture), so I was puzzled at first.

    A man who has raped his own daughter has a dead conscience, so I'm not surprised he didn't change. But I guess she was under tremendous mental turmoil when she decided to commit suicide.

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    1. Sreeja Praveen3 June 2014 at 11:50

      That's true, Pro. I wonder whether he had a conscience at all ! Yes, she must have been. Understandably.

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  30. KParthasarathi28 May 2014 at 12:23

    Left me sad and angry at such loathsome characters

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  31. Corinne Rodrigues29 May 2014 at 20:21

    As sad as the subject is, Sreeja - you did a fab job of writing it!

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    1. Sreeja Praveen3 June 2014 at 11:51

      Thanks a lot for those nice words, Corinne :)

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  32. Ankita 10 June 2014 at 09:16

    what a thoughtful take...i loved the concept of this post. Most girls either keep waiting endlessly for their abusers to have a change of heart or commit suicide in a hope that it will jolt them and they will understand and realize their sin. But nothing can purify a cobra of its venom.

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  33. RSN24 June 2014 at 13:51

    Sreeja,
    The last 2 blogs i read from you, have been in the league of hitting reality (mostly watched in Bala's/Vasanthabalan's screenplay - from Tamil films of the last decade) expressed with utmost skill!
    Know not what to say!
    Great!
    Thanks!

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