Today I’ll begin to travel back,
Back through the embers of time;
Time has bequeathed a lot of lessons,
Lessons that make the heart chime…..
Today I’ll begin to count my riches
Riches that fill me with bliss;
Bliss so supreme, so full of glory,
Glory that I’ll never want to miss…..
Today I’ll begin to live my thoughts,
Thoughts that flavour my senses
Senses which form my hours and days,
Days with no pretences……
Today I’ll begin to grow my wings,
Wings will help me soar high ;
High up above the birds and clouds,
Clouds that line the blue sky….
Today I’ll begin to shine the light,
Light that lives in my soul;
Soul so vibrant, so full of love,
Love that makes me whole…..
Today I’ll begin to nourish my life,
Life that’s precious and small;
Small , yet big to achieve my dreams,
Dreams make me live, after all !
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Linking this to Wednesday Prompt 2014 # 10 at Write Tribe.
Yes. Soulinte velicham onnu thelikkyanam Sree :) Same here. Thelicchal ezhuthaan oru light aayi. Iruttathu irikyunna poley aayirunnu :D
ReplyDeleteLoop verses are very nice :) Lovely poem.
Aaha :) seriyanu....velicham thelinjal iruttu poyallo :) Thanks, Leo :)
DeleteI felt happy after reading the poem with each verse following the other seamlessly and effortlessly.
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot for the encouraging words, KP Sir :)
DeleteWow...do it, for sure...dreams do give us a reason and hope...beautiful words flowing effortlessly. Thanks!
ReplyDeleteTrue, Kajal :) Thanks a lot for the visit and the nice words :)
DeleteThe poem looked so lovely with nice flow of words!!! I loved it
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot, Sri :)
DeleteI thought it was alternate rhyming alone.. but got introduced to loop poetry now.. thanks!!! :D
ReplyDeleteThanks, Archana :) My good friend Leo ( a poet himself ) renames this as Loop verses. Thanks a lot for stopping by :)
DeleteSo beautiful...brought a smile to my face...so positive! :)
ReplyDeleteLoved your poem. It made me smile! ♥
ReplyDeleteYou have a gift I see. :) Loved the way you have weaved the words in this one!
ReplyDeleteNice one.. very creative:)
ReplyDeleteTOday's the day I'll comment! TOday's the day I'll start on the A-Z challenge! Wow if we could only do everything that we ever wanted!
ReplyDeleteBeautifully expressed.
ReplyDeleteYes! please dream new dreams :) wonderful post.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful, Sreeja! Your poem is like an affirmation! :)
ReplyDeleteമൂന്ന് പോസ്റ്റുകളും വായിച്ചു. നന്നായിട്ടുണ്ട്
ReplyDeleteLoved the poem.. positive one!
ReplyDeleteMy favorite lines:
Today I’ll begin to grow my wings,
Wings will help me soar high ;
High up above the birds and clouds,
Clouds that line the blue sky….
Lovely expression, Sreeja! Love the positivity and amen to all that and much more :)
ReplyDeleteBeautiful expressions! Loved the loop and the rhyme in the verses!
ReplyDeleteLoved the flow Sreeja. And may you achieve what you have written :)
ReplyDeleteBeautiful....to new beginnings for us all!
ReplyDeleteWonderful affirmation, Sreeja. Beautifully crafted.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful words of inspiration Sreeja, I loved the pic in the beginning of the poem. It added a serene effect :)
ReplyDeleteLet new beginnings start now and bring abundance in your life...:)