Friday, 7 March 2014

Dimensions - 55 Fiction Triplets !


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The Message…..

“Is that papa ?”, she pointed  at the brightest star in the night sky.

  I looked at her eyes clothed in innocence and face lined with expectation.

“What do you think?”, I knelt down and took her cheeks in mine.

“ Papa always winks at me”, she shrugged , looking at the star.

  And the star blinked once !

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My Warmth..... 

“Is that you?”, I whispered to the bright light that shone before my eyes.

I tried to feel the warmth of that ball of light by putting out my hands towards it.

Suddenly I felt a glow on me and a warmth from inside.

Yes, this was him.

 I felt him grow inside me...

 Bliss !    
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Misfit who ?

 "You're so much of a misfit, I wish I hadn't married you", he said.

 "You've killed the life of my dreams, you can never help me achieve them", his voice echoed across the room. 

 She sat huddled in the corner, her tears flowing silently, washing away her stories of sacrificed love, dreams and unspoken desires.
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43 comments:

  1. Red Handed7 March 2014 at 08:16

    "PAPA ALWAYS WINKS AT ME"
    My God I melted!

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    1. Sreeja Praveen10 March 2014 at 15:44

      :) Thanks a lot, RH :) A sweet thing to say !

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  2. Shilpa Garg7 March 2014 at 10:20

    Oh! The first one tugged at heart!

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  3. Unknown7 March 2014 at 12:30

    Sreeja,so sweetly written.

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  4. Anonymous7 March 2014 at 12:34

    So nice, Misfit is so realistic. I saw my mom and dad in this story!

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    1. Sreeja Praveen10 March 2014 at 15:46

      That's such an honesty, Sri :) Thanks for the visit and the comments :)

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  5. Aarthy7 March 2014 at 13:17

    The first one really touched my heart.

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    1. Sreeja Praveen10 March 2014 at 15:45

      Thanks for the visit and the comments, Aarthy :)

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  6. kalpana solsi7 March 2014 at 13:26

    and the star blinked. this one is so beautiful and touched my heart.

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  7. Mina Menon7 March 2014 at 13:35

    ooops! N I tht wrote the dark story today..

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    1. Sreeja Praveen10 March 2014 at 15:47

      Yes, Mina :) Loved your writing :) Thanks a lot :)

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  8. Anonymous7 March 2014 at 13:46

    Such strings emotions displayed here. I could feel the loss in all there. :(

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    1. Sreeja Praveen10 March 2014 at 15:47

      Yes, the common theme is loss this time. Thanks a lot, Jyothi !

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  9. Bhavya N7 March 2014 at 13:49

    Oh god :(

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  10. Rajlakshmi7 March 2014 at 14:10

    The first one is so sweet... And the last one just broke my heart. Beautiful write

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    1. Sreeja Praveen10 March 2014 at 15:48

      Yes, loss is a real sorrow. Thanks, Rajlakshmi !

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  11. Anita Sabat7 March 2014 at 14:43

    Triplets that tug at heartstrings :) Very nice ones, Sreeja.

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  12. Michelle Liew7 March 2014 at 17:15

    Aww. The first story tugged at the heart indeed!

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  13. Anonymous7 March 2014 at 17:34

    Nice little stories!

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  14. Parvathy7 March 2014 at 17:43

    The first one just swept me off my feet. Loved it :)

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    1. Sreeja Praveen10 March 2014 at 15:51

      Welcome here , Parvathy :) Thanks for the nice words :)

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  15. Anonymous7 March 2014 at 22:19

    The first one tugged my heart and made me smile!!

    All 3 are beautiful Sreeja :)

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  16. Jyotsna Bhatia7 March 2014 at 22:36

    The first one is real cute Sreeja.. and the last one is sure a reality of many homes

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    1. Sreeja Praveen10 March 2014 at 15:52

      Very true, Jyotsna. An untold reality. Thanks a lot :)

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  17. Jyotsna Bhatia7 March 2014 at 22:37

    The first one was real cute Sreeja and the last one was a reality of many homes..

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  18. Anonymous8 March 2014 at 15:35

    Love no.1 and no.2 they are cute. The last one is powerful and a reality. Great writing, Sreeja:)

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    1. Sreeja Praveen10 March 2014 at 15:52

      Yes, that's a sad reality. Thanks , Vishal. Shall catch up with you soon ! :)

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  19. ajith9 March 2014 at 20:55

    ഹൃദയസ്പര്‍ശിയായ എഴുത്ത്

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    1. Sreeja Praveen16 March 2014 at 11:45

      ഇഷ്ടപ്പെട്ടു എന്നറിഞ്ഞതില്‍ സന്തോഷം. നന്ദി അജിത് ഏട്ടാ :)

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  20. Shailaja V10 March 2014 at 10:10

    That first one was so touching! Faith can work wonders. Enjoyed them, Sreeja :)

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  21. Unknown11 March 2014 at 11:45

    Beautiful 55ers.. the first one was very touching.. :)

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  22. Anonymous14 March 2014 at 15:23

    These are beautiful 55-ers. Like most others, the first one in particular struck a chord!

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    1. Sreeja Praveen16 March 2014 at 11:52

      Love is such a soft topic, isn't it ! Thanks, PB :)

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