Friday, 7 March 2014

Dimensions - 55 Fiction Triplets !


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The Message…..

“Is that papa ?”, she pointed  at the brightest star in the night sky.

  I looked at her eyes clothed in innocence and face lined with expectation.

“What do you think?”, I knelt down and took her cheeks in mine.

“ Papa always winks at me”, she shrugged , looking at the star.

  And the star blinked once !

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My Warmth..... 

“Is that you?”, I whispered to the bright light that shone before my eyes.

I tried to feel the warmth of that ball of light by putting out my hands towards it.

Suddenly I felt a glow on me and a warmth from inside.

Yes, this was him.

I felt him grow inside me...

Bliss !    
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Misfit who ?

"You're so much of a misfit, I wish I hadn't married you", he said.

"You've killed the life of my dreams, you can never help me achieve them", his voice echoed across the room. 

She sat huddled in the corner, her tears flowing silently, washing away her stories of sacrificed love, dreams and unspoken desires.
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At Day 6 of The Write Tribe Festival of Words 3 , it is raining  55 Fiction on Friday !!  Check out some wonderful entries here.




44 comments:

  1. "PAPA ALWAYS WINKS AT ME"
    My God I melted!

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    1. :) Thanks a lot, RH :) A sweet thing to say !

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  2. Oh! The first one tugged at heart!

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  3. So nice, Misfit is so realistic. I saw my mom and dad in this story!

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    1. That's such an honesty, Sri :) Thanks for the visit and the comments :)

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  4. The first one really touched my heart.

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    1. Thanks for the visit and the comments, Aarthy :)

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  5. and the star blinked. this one is so beautiful and touched my heart.

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  6. ooops! N I tht wrote the dark story today..

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    1. Yes, Mina :) Loved your writing :) Thanks a lot :)

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  7. Such strings emotions displayed here. I could feel the loss in all there. :(

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    1. Yes, the common theme is loss this time. Thanks a lot, Jyothi !

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  8. The first one is so sweet... And the last one just broke my heart. Beautiful write

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    1. Yes, loss is a real sorrow. Thanks, Rajlakshmi !

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  9. Triplets that tug at heartstrings :) Very nice ones, Sreeja.

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    1. Thanks for the lovely comment, Anita :)

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  10. Aww. The first story tugged at the heart indeed!

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    1. Who wouldn't love a kid :) thanks dear :)

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  11. The first one just swept me off my feet. Loved it :)

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    1. Welcome here , Parvathy :) Thanks for the nice words :)

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  12. The first one tugged my heart and made me smile!!

    All 3 are beautiful Sreeja :)

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    1. Thanks a lot, pixie :) Welcome here :)

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  13. The first one is real cute Sreeja.. and the last one is sure a reality of many homes

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    1. Very true, Jyotsna. An untold reality. Thanks a lot :)

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  14. The first one was real cute Sreeja and the last one was a reality of many homes..

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  15. Love no.1 and no.2 they are cute. The last one is powerful and a reality. Great writing, Sreeja:)

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    1. Yes, that's a sad reality. Thanks , Vishal. Shall catch up with you soon ! :)

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  16. ഹൃദയസ്പര്‍ശിയായ എഴുത്ത്

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    1. ഇഷ്ടപ്പെട്ടു എന്നറിഞ്ഞതില്‍ സന്തോഷം. നന്ദി അജിത് ഏട്ടാ :)

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  17. That first one was so touching! Faith can work wonders. Enjoyed them, Sreeja :)

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  18. Beautiful 55ers.. the first one was very touching.. :)

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    1. Welcome here, Vaisakh ! Thanks a lot :)

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  19. These are beautiful 55-ers. Like most others, the first one in particular struck a chord!

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    1. Love is such a soft topic, isn't it ! Thanks, PB :)

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