Friday, 11 October 2013

The Rain on the Peacock :)


When we think of Rains, we think of the Peacock too !

I just tried if I could put the Rain and Peacock duo into a Diamante perspective.....and here's the result :)

                                          Rain
                                    Sweet, cold,
                        dripping, chattering, refreshing,
                     beautiful,  lively,  soulful,   spirited,
                        dancing, rejoicing, enjoying,
                                    Pretty, colourful,
                                       Peacock !!


This brings the 11th day of UBC to a close :)



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7 comments:

  1. Shilpa Garg12 October 2013 at 17:35

    Love the way you have expressed about rain and peacock in a diamante. Good one :)

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  2. Sreeja Praveen13 October 2013 at 08:35

    Thanks, Shilpa ji :) I guess I have bent some rules, though :)

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  3. Unknown13 October 2013 at 13:55

    Lovely imagery,Sreeja.

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  4. Richa Singh20 October 2013 at 12:06

    Poetry writing eludes me and yet finding such creations drill me to try! Beautiful stuff!

    Richa

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    1. Sreeja Praveen21 October 2013 at 13:09

      arey yar...I'm also doing this for the first time :D

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  5. Awesome Mumma15 November 2013 at 13:01

    :) Loved it!!

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