I couldn’t hold on any longer.
"I can’t bear it , dear. I can’t, anymore. Can you just be quick ?", I appealed to him earnestly.
I could see Amit was calm even while trying his best to drive fast.
I wrapped my arms around my stomach, hoping that would ease the feeling.
" We’re almost there, sweetheart," Amit said as he swerved the car to the right and entered the by-lane.
I heaved a huge sigh of relief.
Finally, we’d reached.
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Linking this to A toZ 2014 and the Ultimate Blogging Challenge.
sreeja i just love ur posts !! in the biginning u paint a different scenario beautifully and the last line will always be a surprise :D very well written :)
ReplyDeleteVisiting from A to Z! Love the look of your blog :)
ReplyDelete~Katie
www.thecyborgmom.blogspot.com
That's awesome and I'm totally hungry! I'm visiting from the A-Z Challenge and I found your blog on the less than 100 followers list!
ReplyDeleteOMG! hahahaha, what a twist! great post Sreeja!
ReplyDeletehaha..., sometimes it can be like that :) Another good one, Sreeja!
ReplyDeleteBeauty Interprets, Expresses, Manifests the Eternal
seriously that was a big surprise at the end ....loved it :):)
ReplyDeleteTHIS IS SOOOOOOOOOOOOOO ME! Bwahahahahahaahah
ReplyDeletehehehehe...... i'm exactly like that!!! and when i behave like that my hubby will ask me.....how many days since u last ate?
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ReplyDeleteHaha...good one. And that' me holding the stomach! :D
ReplyDeleteAs always this is awesome!!!! I do this often and ppl wil think I am pregnant or having chums bcos I clutch my stomach so tightly! :P
ReplyDelete~S(t)ri
Participant|AtoZ Challenge 2014
Smile, it makes (y)our day!
drama queen :-D
ReplyDeletehahaha! That's me! How did you know? ;)
ReplyDeleteRandom Thoughts Naba
you just made me hungry! Great fun!
ReplyDeleteAha! What a twist!
ReplyDeleteThat's such a tempting spread. I want it now! :D
Another wonderful twisted one...You should get all these in a collection...Seriously.
ReplyDeleteEven my topic is hunger! :)
ReplyDeleteIshithaa
He he he loved the twist...
ReplyDeleteButterflies in the tummy! :) Food that is so yummy :)
ReplyDeleteNice story :)
You got me thinking...baby time! And then twisted the last part with food! You foodie you!
ReplyDeleteDrama Queen indeed! Carol @ Battered Hope
ReplyDeleteHaha... Lovely.. Im still grinning wide!! :P :P
ReplyDeleteFoodie girl.......!!!
ReplyDeleteNot the ending anybody was 'expecting' you to 'deliver'!!
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