Wednesday, 9 April 2014

A to Z Random Post # 8 H - Holding on !







 I couldn’t hold on any longer.

 "I can’t bear it , dear. I can’t, anymore. Can you just be quick ?", I appealed to him earnestly.

I could see  Amit was calm even while trying his best to drive fast.

I wrapped my arms around my stomach, hoping that would ease the feeling.

" We’re almost there, sweetheart," Amit said as he swerved the car to the right and entered the by-lane.

I heaved a huge sigh of relief.

Finally, we’d reached.



"Thanks, dear. I couldn’t have remained hungry anymore," I said ,tucking into the delicious spread with a sheepish smile.

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Linking this to A toZ 2014 and the Ultimate Blogging Challenge.

25 comments:

  1. sreeja i just love ur posts !! in the biginning u paint a different scenario beautifully and the last line will always be a surprise :D very well written :)

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  2. Visiting from A to Z! Love the look of your blog :)
    ~Katie
    www.thecyborgmom.blogspot.com

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  3. That's awesome and I'm totally hungry! I'm visiting from the A-Z Challenge and I found your blog on the less than 100 followers list!

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  4. OMG! hahahaha, what a twist! great post Sreeja!

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  5. haha..., sometimes it can be like that :) Another good one, Sreeja!

    Beauty Interprets, Expresses, Manifests the Eternal

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  6. seriously that was a big surprise at the end ....loved it :):)

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  7. THIS IS SOOOOOOOOOOOOOO ME! Bwahahahahahaahah

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  8. hehehehe...... i'm exactly like that!!! and when i behave like that my hubby will ask me.....how many days since u last ate?

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  10. Haha...good one. And that' me holding the stomach! :D

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  11. As always this is awesome!!!! I do this often and ppl wil think I am pregnant or having chums bcos I clutch my stomach so tightly! :P

    ~S(t)ri
    Participant|AtoZ Challenge 2014
    Smile, it makes (y)our day!

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  12. you just made me hungry! Great fun!

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  13. Aha! What a twist!
    That's such a tempting spread. I want it now! :D

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  14. Another wonderful twisted one...You should get all these in a collection...Seriously.

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  15. Butterflies in the tummy! :) Food that is so yummy :)
    Nice story :)

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  16. You got me thinking...baby time! And then twisted the last part with food! You foodie you!

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  17. Haha... Lovely.. Im still grinning wide!! :P :P

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  18. Not the ending anybody was 'expecting' you to 'deliver'!!

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